ISSUES WITH LINES
If issues with ÒcharacterÓ is what most trips up actors, then issues with ÒlinesÓ runs a very, very close second!
I have seen so many terrific actors completely blow a performance because they had some block concerning the process of taking the lines from the page and speaking them.
For
instance, itÕs sad to see how many actors shoot themselves in the foot by
having their Òhead in the pageÓ in their audition. In other words, their primary focus was down, on the page they were holding,
instead of up,
on the situation or person they were dealing with.
I recently went to a commercial audition and was asked to stand behind the camera and deliver the cue lines to a couple actors.
Their lines, as is the custom with
commercial auditions, were written on a large tablet of paper beside the
camera, so they can read them if they want to.
The
casting director asked them to do a quick rehearsal so she could give them
notes if needed.
Both
actors were amazing! Neither one
even glanced at the tablet, trusting that they knew the lines well enough. They came off as spontaneous, real and
funny. It was pure magic.
They were
so fearlessÉUNTIL the casting director said-
ÒOkay,
weÕre going to film this now.Ó
Well,
guess what happenedÉ
As the
camera rolled, BOTH actors stared at the lines on the tablet out of concern
they would not get the words right, so, of course, they came off as dead and
stilted.
All the
joy was gone. POOF!
It was so
sad to see.
As an audience, we must feel that the actor wants to be up off the page, for that is where the ÒmagicÓ is. (That doesnÕt mean that he has to be looking the reader directly in the eyes. His gaze could be off to the side, deep in thought.)
The actor doesnÕt mind looking down to grab the idea of the next line, but he must always want to return to looking up.
Notice I say grab the ÒideaÓ of the line. That is because although he wants to speak the lines exactly as written, he doesnÕt NEED to. He would rather paraphrase than put Ògetting-the-lines word-perfectÓ ahead of his selfish experience of the scene.
ÒParaphraseÓ
-to express the meaning of something written using
different words.
Whenever I bring up ÒparaphrasingÓ, some panic-stricken actor inevitably says something like-
ÒMy friend paraphrased at an audition once and the casting director got very upset!Ó
ÉPersonally, I think this is an urban legend. It certainly has never been my experience.
But you know what I say to that one-in-a-million writer or casting director who gets ANGRY?
ÒScrew you.Ó
Normally, if a casting director wants you to say the words exactly as written (almost never happens) then they will politely ask you to do it again. If they get offended for some reason then thatÕs their unhealthy issue and has nothing to do with you.
I guarantee that until you become comfortable changing a word here or there, you will have difficulty auditioning for TV and film.
The pressure that actors put on themselves to get all the words right DESTROYS their auditions!
The character you are playing isnÕt involved in trying to get all the words right, so why are you?
NO ONE ever booked a job because they got all the words right!
Theater actors, especially, have a difficult time paraphrasing.
This is understandable because theater is a medium of words and ideas. (Whereas TV and films are mediums of images.)
Therefore, in theatrical productions, there is a great respect for the writing. No one in their right mind would paraphrase Shakespeare! (However, I did once in college because I forgot my speech. Try paraphrasing in iambic pentameter! Yikes!)
However, the same does not hold true for TV and film, where, in general, there is very little respect for writers.
Mind you, this is not my feeling to be sure! But executives (or ÒsuitsÓ as some people call them) tend to feel a little differently.
And besides, even if you are auditioning for a well-respected writer, he knows that this is just the audition, and that you havenÕt had a lot of time with the material. He understands that if you book the job then you will memorize it completely.
DonÕt forget that casting is just like high school. Nobody wants to be around the kid who is desperate to make friends, and everyone wants to sit at the lunch table with the kid who doesnÕt need them to sit there.
Therefore, do you want to be seen as the Ògood little boyÓ who, with nothing better to do, had all the time in the world to read the entire script and memorize it word-for-word in a desperate need to impress?
Or wouldnÕt you rather be the actor who was too busy putting up a theatrical production with his friends or filming some independent movie, to put in all that unnecessary work.
You can behave as if you are that lighthearted actor, entering breezily, as if to say, ÒI have a busy life, but IÕm glad to be here, IÕm as prepared as I could be, and letÕs have some fun.Ó
ItÕs not that youÕre unprepared. Put in the amount of work that you desire in order to have a joyful experience.
But do it for you, and not for them!
When I first moved to LA, I met this very pretty young actress who worked all the time. I remember we were talking about the subject of paraphrasing at auditions, and she said-
(Valley-Girl accent)
ÒI donÕt care. I just say whatever I want to. I just say whatever. I donÕt care. I change the lines all the time to whatever I want.Ó
And in that moment I realized, ÒOkayÉif she can do that and book work, then certainly I can change a word here or there!Ó
Please give yourself the same freedom.
IÕm certainly not saying that you should just change the words willy-nilly. Obviously you have to, at the very least, get out the ÒideaÓ of each line, or the other characters responses wonÕt make any sense.
When paraphrasing, there is a line you do not want to
cross, or they wonÕt feel that they can trust you to say the script as written
on the set. However, trust
yourself that you know where that line is.
I like to say that if you are an actor who is concerned about getting the words right, then thatÕs Òin your pocketÓ.
In other words, you own that desire and carry it with you all the time, so youÕll never
paraphrase or change the lines SO MUCH that youÕll offend someone. So you can stop worrying
about it.
And hereÕs the good news: When you release your need to get all the words right, you relax. When youÕre relaxed, you end up getting more of the words right!
I canÕt tell you how many times the following has happened at my workshop:
Someone does a scene, the whole time reading the lines right off the page; their head buried in the script.
When they are done, they explain that they have Òa tough time memorizing linesÓ.
So I immediately ask them to do it again, but this time they are not allowed to look down at the script at all.
Gulp!
Then they do the scene again, and, inevitably, remember almost every word exactly as written.
Why does this happen?
Because the actor is relaxed and free of fear.
And why is the actor relaxed and free of fear?
Because he has been given permission to be.
He has an excuse now. Everyone watching him heard me say that he wasnÕt allowed to look down. Therefore, he wonÕt get in trouble when he forgets a line.
Well, this permission I gave him he could give himself.
And you can do the same.
This may sound contrary, but while I am saying that itÕs good to be memorized enough to be able to have your primary focus be upwards, it is ALSO important to know that you donÕt need to be memorized to book a job.
The way a scene is played in a TV or film audition is not
quite the same it will be played in front of the cameras. It really is a different animal. ItÕs not supposed to look just like
what will be seen in the finished product. ItÕs an audition.
The most obvious difference is the fact that the scene neednÕt be memorized. The actor is expected to hold the sides through the scene, and use them whenever needed.
When
you are not fully memorized, there is a simple trick to getting the lines from
the page during an audition:
Make sure to look down at the page while the reader is speaking, and look up when you are speaking.
Many actors make the mistake of looking down at the page while they, themselves, are speaking. ItÕs fine to do that once in awhile, but it should be something you avoid if at all possible.
I
think this habit is most often due to some long ago teacher instructing the
actor to Ð ÒAlways look at the person who is speaking!Ó
But
remember, your acting should be selfish!
So
whatÕs the most selfish and fun moment to get to play in a scene?
As
a great actress once said-
ÒActing
is hearing something for the first time, then saying something for the first
timeÓ.
Those
moments of honest reaction and decision are the delicious and magical moments.
Therefore,
the most fun moments to play are when the reader is finishing his line, because
you get to receive it, react to it and deliver your next line. So, be off the page for those moments
so you can enjoy them.
So to clarify:
á While the reader is saying his line, look down at the page to grab the idea of your next line.
á While you are doing so have faith that you are hearing what the reader is saying. (You have read the material earlier, you know what heÕs saying, so have faith that you are hearing it now for the first time, even if part of you is occupied with getting your next line.)
á Now, get your head up BEFORE he is done reading his line, so you can have your delicious moment of reaction. Once youÕve begun your line, you can feel free to go back down to the page if you have a long series of lines. The important thing is that you got to play with that magic moment of discovery and decision.
Someone
once said, ÒActing is reacting.Ó
So donÕt miss out on those magic moments because you have your head down
in the page!
Besides,
the casting person is
undoubtedly looking down when he is saying his lines, so what good does it do you to be looking
at him at that time anyway? HeÕs
studying you primarily while you are speaking, so be up and off the page as much
as you can at those times.
I
was shocked to find out that there is a highly respected acting coach in Los
Angeles who tells her actors to do the exact opposite!
In
fact, I have heard that most coaches are teaching their actors to not look down
until itÕs their turn to speak.
Why?! In my opinion, that makes no
sense.
Think
about it logically. Besides all
the reasons I have already listed, ask yourself this; in a film, when the
camera pulls in for a closeup, who is the camera usually showing?
The
person who is talking!
No
one won an Oscar because they were good at listening!
You
might ask, ÒWell, couldnÕt I watch the casting director as he speaks, then have
my reaction, THEN look down quickly to get my line?Ó
The
problem with that is, by looking down during the time between having a reaction
to something and choosing what you want to say in response, you are
interrupting the moment.
Why
would you want to break up the most important moments by looking down?
By doing so, you are stopping the organic flow, which makes you appear less like the character and more like an actor.
Be
smart and selfish about when you look down at the page.
When
coaches suggest that actors look down at the start of their lines, they are
turning the actorsÕ audition into an acting ÒexerciseÓ. The exercise goes as follows:
You sit facing your scene partner. You watch and listen to your partner as he speaks. When heÕs done allow yourself to take in what he said and have a reaction to it, THEN look down to get your next line.
This
exercise teaches actors to not just rush to speak their line, but to make sure
that they are hearing and reacting to their scene partner.
However,
an audition is not an exercise!
(By the way, apparently the respected LA acting coach also warns actors to never paraphrase, giving them one more reason to feel tense and afraid in the audition room.)
Many actors, when they arenÕt fully memorized, are afraid
to look up off the page while they are speaking, because they are worried that
they will forget the next word or line.
And when
they do forget
the second half of a line, they quickly look down at the page, sacrificing
whatever magic was happening for them in the moment.
What they donÕt realize is that itÕs fine when you forget the next line!
Real people arenÕt always sure of what they want to say next.
Being
unsure of what to say next is just like LIFE!
Allow me to illustrate by using the famous quote from ÒHamletÓ:
ÒTo
be, or not to be.Ó
Many
actors, if they forgot the second half of the line, would do this:
(Looking
up, self assuredly)
ÒTo
beÉÒ
(Uh-oh! Immediately looking down in a panic and
quickly reading the line as they stare at the page)
Ò-or-not-to-be.Ó
Ugh!
Now if the same actor would just stay up off the page and take a moment to remember the second half of the line, it would look like this:
(Looking
up, self assuredly)
ÒTo
beÉÒ
(Thinking. Thinking. Thinking. Ah-ha!)
Ò-or
not to be.Ó
IsnÕt
that, in a way, exactly how that moment should be played.
The audience canÕt read your mind.
The
period of time when the actor was trying to remember the next line, looks
exactly like the character trying to decide what he wants to say!
ItÕs
a freebie moment of real human behavior.
So
forgetting the line was a gift, because it made that moment so much more than
it would have been if the actor had just raced through the line, as most actors
would.
I
love the quote, ÒItÕs the cracks that let the light of God in.Ó
HereÕs what
a well-known British actress has to say on the subject:
ÒThe whole essence of
learning lines is to forget them so you can make them sound like you thought of
them that instant.Ó
-
Glenda Jackson
Many actors are in such a panic to get the words right that they just quickly rattle them off. The reason being that these actors are trying not to falter or stammer, or worse yet, leave a pause where they feel that nothing is happening.
They fear
the uncomfortableness of that moment of silence.
However,
in most scenarios, there must be moments of silence. Because itÕs untrue to say that Ònothing is happeningÓ. Something very important is happening -
the character is trying to decide what to say next!
There
must be some faltering or hesitation.
ItÕs real human behavior.
So, you
see, the thing those actors are trying not to do is actually essential to booking the job!
Think
about ÒEmilyÕsÓ famous monologue from the end of the play ÒOur TownÓ.
Could you
imagine if she just rattled off her lines like she had them all memorized?!:
ÒGood-bye-world.-Good-bye-Grover's-Corners-Mama-and-Papa-Good-bye-to-clocks-ticking-and-Mama's-sunflowers-And-food-and-coffee-And-new-ironed-dresses-and-hot-baths-and-sleeping-and-waking-up-Oh-earth-you-are-too-wonderful-for-anybody-to-realize-you.Ó
What a terrible, missed opportunity that would be!
The character of ÒEmilyÓ must be discovering the words in the moment. Her mind is racing with thoughts, and she ÒchoosesÓ these words.
DonÕt plan the silences. Let them happen organically. And if one of the reasons they happen is that you are not
sure what comes next, then thatÕs great!
Neither is she!
So
when you forget your next line, donÕt have a fearful, knee-jerk reaction and
think to yourself, ÒCome on! Hurry
up, Stupid! Get the right line out
or theyÕll know youÕre a sham!Ó
Instead,
just stay involved in the scene, and be glad that the moment came up to add
realism and texture. Trying to
think of what to say next is a wonderful, authentic moment for your character
to have in most any scene.
Better
you should paraphrase a little until you are back on track, then to stop the
scene, blush and apologize that you Òmessed up your lines.Ó
An added note:
Make sure to memorize at least
your first couple of lines. ItÕs
of the utmost importance that you begin a scene looking like a real person, and
not an actor looking down to get his lines.
In my opinion, if you have the
first few lines memorized they wonÕt mind how many times you look down
later!
And you have no excuse for not
knowing them, because you are free to take a moment to look at them before the
scene begins.
I was coaching an actor in New York City, who was struggling in his performance of a scene. At one point in the scene he threw his script to the floor.
Afterwards, I asked him why he had done that, and he explained that he hated holding sides during an audition. He felt it made the scene Òless realÓ.
A lot of actors are uncomfortable holding the sides (or ÒscriptÓ).
These actors desperately want to set the sides down and do it from memory. They feel the sides make the scene seem false, so theyÕll drop them onto their lap or the floor.
It simply isnÕt true that using your sides keeps an audition scene from being ÒrealÓ.
The casting people expect you to hold and use the sides in an audition scenario. They are accustomed to seeing actors look down at the script to get their next line. As long as you stay involved the scene, the sides are invisible to casting people.
The problem
is that many actors have a hard time staying involved in the scene when they
have to look down at the sides.
But, this
issue is completely of their own making.
It is a wall that was built by them. If you think looking down to get your line takes you out of
the scene, then that will be your reality until you change your mind about
it.
ThereÕs no
reason for you to feel that the scene has stopped when you look down at the
page.
I think a lot of these actors have that same ghostly voice of an acting teacher repeating in their head, ÒStay focused on your scene partner. You must keep looking at your scene partner.Ó
But, this does not apply to an audition.
Nor should you feel constrained to do so in an actual filmed scene.
I certainly donÕt STARE at the people I talk to in my everyday life.
You can let that ghostly voice go. ItÕs no longer helpful.
Here are
three reasons you should hold onto the sides:
1. If you forget a line, the pages are
right there in front of you, and you wonÕt miss a beat as you look to the page
to get the line.
2. I believe it makes casting people
uncomfortable if you let go of the sides for too long. It doesnÕt fit the style of an
audition, so it takes them out of the scene. They are wondering why you donÕt want to hold onto the
sides.
3. If you donÕt hold the sides, it
sends a message that you are now giving your ÒfinalÓ performance. It says, ÒIf you hire me, this is
exactly how IÕll play the scene.Ó
ÉWouldnÕt you rather have the casting person think, ÓGee, if sheÕs this
good in the audition, just think how great sheÕll be when they actually shoot
this!Ó
Concerning line memorization:
When memorizing the lines, you should solely be involved in just that; committing them to memory.
Many actors combine line memorization with planning how they will say the line.
You mustnÕt do this.
ThatÕs how you come up with lifeless and controlled line-readings.
We all have a vulture that wants to give us line readings as we memorize. HeÕs squawking line readings in fear that the line wonÕt come out ÒcorrectlyÓ if you donÕt plan it ahead of time.
Just let your vulture know that youÕre not interested in his line reading.
So how do you memorize a scene without inadvertently memorizing line readings as well?
First you must make sure that you are seeing the lines as ÒideasÓ and not just a series of words in a certain mathematical order.
(Read the chapter SEE THE LINES AS IDEAS.)
When your vulture tries to give you a line reading, tell him that youÕre not interested, and that youÕre going to focus solely on the idea of the line. In other words; Òwhat the line meansÓ.
Tell him that you want to be surprised by how the line comes out in performance because itÕs the only way that the scene can be spontaneous.
When memorizing, simply
ask yourself, ÒWhat does this line mean?
What do I mean when I say it?Ó
IÕm not talking about
some hidden subtextual meaning.
On the contrary, just
the literal, shallow and obvious meaning of the line.
Seeing
the lines as ÒideasÓ will make memorizing MUCH easier.
Personally,
I used to hate memorizing, and now I find that itÕs easy and painless.
When
you memorize lines as ÒideasÓ, itÕs as though you are absorbing the lines into your
stomach, versus shoving them into your head. You will own them.
And,
you will no longer feel the pressure of saying every line word-perfect, because
now you understand the line and are not involved in simply Ògetting the words
rightÓ.
A
side note:
For
the most part, if an actor canÕt paraphrase, itÕs because he has memorized the
lines as just a series of words in a certain order, and didnÕt put the bulk of
his focus, while memorizing, on the ÒideasÓ of the lines.
ItÕs
not that he doesnÕt understand what heÕs saying, but heÕs more interested in
getting the words right than sharing the ideas.
I donÕt like to memorize (or rehearse) a scene out loud.
The goal of an audition is to have it happen, as if for the first time, right there in the casting directorÕs office.
I figure the less you have to fake the better. The character certainly hasnÕt said
these words before. Therefore, if
I wait until my audition to speak the words out loud, then I will have the
genuine experience of saying those things for the first time right there in the
audition. I wonÕt have to pretend
that IÕve never said those words before.
That aspect of my performance will be totally honest by definition. WhatÕs more real than that?
My favorite way to memorize is to just sit and write out my lines on a separate piece of paper. I write slowly, really taking in each word, and the meaning of each sentence. After doing that just once, I find that the words are well on their way to being memorized.
If I do want to run the lines out loud, I speak them quietly to myself, void of any emotion.
Sanford Meisner, the famous acting teacher, recommends using a Òrobot voiceÓ. While saying the lines aloud to yourself, use a quiet, monotone voice with no inflections, and speak in an even rhythmic pacing. This way there will be no line readings set in stone.